Score: 10

"Amazing."

submission: Spider-Ninja

date: September 27, 2009

If you want to replace the music, try some J-Pop or more modern Japanese music; I think that may be a little more appropriate to the animation.

Overall, a blast to watch. Can't wait for the next one!

Score: 9

"Fantastic!"

submission: Tarboy

date: August 30, 2009

I'm looking forward to the sequel. Maybe we can etch out a little game thing. (I'm a good programmer!) A little problem I had: Grandpa's (/) eye keeps switching between right and left. A bit inconsistent; please change this or make note of this on the sequel!

Score: 10

"Simulation - Job"

submission: The Facebook Game

date: August 20, 2009

'Nuff said.

Score: 8

"It's missing 16th background"

submission: Starfox Dance

date: March 15, 2009

A lot of great techno songs have this awesome background synth that plays the same two sixteenth notes in a pattern for each measure. They can be removed in some measures to accent certain parts of the music. A good pattern would be an octave (1 and 8 for low and high) matching the main melody key. The rhythm I think would be best for this song is:

1181181181181188

16th notes per each measure, with the key of the octave changing as the key changes.

Score: 9

"Transitions...."

submission: Sp1r1T - Forgotten <(^^,)>

date: July 20, 2008

Not every transition in a trance/rave song needs to be a measure-long little break in the noise. You can mix it up a little, play around with the EQs, add some effects, play with the pitch. I like that sextuplet (sectuplet? Is that 6 or 7?) you added at the beginning, though. For that, 5/5.

Score: 9

"Very lovely"

submission: Warehouse of Neglect (Metal)

date: July 5, 2008

The vocals could use some working on; when I hear good death metal, it usually has a deep, gravely, grueling voice. The guitar is excellent, the drums could have a little better bass.