Too much reverb.
I don't like the reverb. Good music, mix could be a bit better.
It's missing 16th background
A lot of great techno songs have this awesome background synth that plays the same two sixteenth notes in a pattern for each measure. They can be removed in some measures to accent certain parts of the music. A good pattern would be an octave (1 and 8 for low and high) matching the main melody key. The rhythm I think would be best for this song is:
16th notes per each measure, with the key of the octave changing as the key changes.
Not every transition in a trance/rave song needs to be a measure-long little break in the noise. You can mix it up a little, play around with the EQs, add some effects, play with the pitch. I like that sextuplet (sectuplet? Is that 6 or 7?) you added at the beginning, though. For that, 5/5.
Sextuplet? O.o You mean Kick roll?
Anyway, Thanks :)
The vocals could use some working on; when I hear good death metal, it usually has a deep, gravely, grueling voice. The guitar is excellent, the drums could have a little better bass.
Aw, come on!!!
You didn't use my favorite part of the entire song! You could've mixed it up a little with the bridge! But you didn't! I'm disappointed. Regardless, this is still good music. 4/5
This song is amazing
What is the sound that you used in the beginning with the wah-wah filter? This song totally made the entire game. Fantastic music! Grate job! Great job! Greet jawb!
Thanks so much!
Hmmm...I can't actually remember but I think it's a refill for the software Reason by Propellerhead. Contact me via e-mail and I'll look it up for you.
^^ I was looking for good ninja vs. pirate battle music. This is perfect! Fantastic composition, sir. Keep up the good work, and check out some of my music! (Most of it's verrrry old.)
i wonder who wins
jack sparrow or leonardo from ninja turtles
thanks fo review dont worry lol i wont stop
The song is really quite good. The music could go into some sort of bridge part though. It got kind of repetitive. Also, the lyrics needed to be a bit louder, either that or the music slightly softer.
Otherwise, very nicely done. I enjoyed this piece! Make sure to review my audio, too. : )
Thanks For The Review Oh And TheSoulReaper Is A Personal Freind Of Mind So If You See Him Promoting My Music Dont Flame It
I couldn't exactly tell what the song would be like until around the middle part. The entire song was fantastic.
Great job on your first piece! Check out and review some of mine!
Thank you matey
That's an Ok song....
As songs go, this is not the best. It still has that strange, mechanical sound that screams, "HEY!!! I'm a MIDI!!!!!!!" I find midis annoying most of the times.
If you could manage, try and get a "real-audio" mixer, like Logic, Garage Band, or Pro Audio Tools. Then, try getting a microphone and an actual organ sound so that it sounds a bit cleaner.
The song itself was extremely well written, and bravo for that! But what you are showing is more of an exposition of the writing of the song, and not the actual sound of the song itself.
Now, on to what I like about the song rather than how it's made:
The song is well done with two precussion bases, the pan organ and constant lead harmonize very well and compliment eachother. The main organ pops in well, and taking out each track around the end was a good call. Nice suspension tactic, always a nice call for music.
Great job! I hope to see great music from you later.
Wow thank you so much man i need more reviews like this, okay fist off i just want to say that i am still really new to fruity loops i just made with what i had at the time , people are helping me out and i am getting better so make sure you keep checking back, also thanks for your tips and all your knowledge and most of all thanks for your good review i appriciate it
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